Kia-ora I am Ciara from Saint Mary's school, I liked how you made the background color to match the story type, maybe next time you could add a little bit more writing because its a little bit short for a part one, Ma Te Wa Ciara
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Kia-ora I am Ciara from Saint Mary's school,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you made the background color to match the story type,
maybe next time you could add a little bit more writing because its a little bit short for a part one,
Ma Te Wa Ciara
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